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SOLITUDE

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I WONDER WHY HE NEVER CALLS…

WHEN WE WERE YOUNG WE PLAYED WE LAUGHED WE HAD A BALL!

I WONDER WHY HE NEVER CALLS…

THEN GROWING UP TO TEENAGE DAYS

WE DANCED, WE KISSED HOLD HANDS AND

TALKED THROUGHOUT THAT PHASE.

STILL WONDER WHAT HAPPENED TO THOSE DAYS.

WE PLAYED, WE LAUGHED AND HAD A BALL,

I WONDER WHY HE NEVER CALLS.

I’VE HEARD HE MARRIED AND HAD A BOY

THEN CAME A GIRL AND BROUGHT MORE JOY.

I DREAMED SO MUCH AND LIVED SO LITTLE

SHORTED DAYS NOW AND LIFE SO BRITTLE

WHEN AUTUMN LEAVES BEGUINS TO FALL

AND COLD WINTER AIR STARTS TO CRAWL,

I WONDER WHY HE NEVER CALLS…

MAYBE HE NEVER WAS…

MAYBE HE WAS NOT REAL?

MAYBE ANOTHER DREAM AFTER ALL?

AND EVEN THOUGH MY PAIN GREW SMALL

I WONDER WHY HE NEVER CALLED.

  • #loneliness
  • #emotion
  • #poem

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lionel @lionelwalfish

This is great Gisele! The wording and rhyming is A+.
We've all lived those moments of waiting for 'that call'.
A great and fun read. Much enjoyed!!

Gisele @giselerosenwald

Thank you Lionel.
I am still waiting to read your short stories. I've been back from my t See more

Kaylin @kaylingoodson

i wounder why this makes u think good job love your poem A+

Akhila @akki

wow! this is great! enjoyed it.!  and also guys, i am new here so i have written a story only chapter 1. i will continue with it later. i just hope please read my story and follow me.! thank you. great job gisele.

Gisele @giselerosenwald

Thank you Awhila and I sure will read your story.

Paulo @paulozeferino151a

I really liked!

Gisele @giselerosenwald

I am glad Paulo. Thanks for letting me know.

Manasa @Manu

Great lines of feelings, heart touching enjoyed it.

Robin @robincarretti

Very emotionally done I enjoyed it so touching.

Gisele @giselerosenwald

I am not fluent in english, so I ask you to correct whatever is not rightly said.  I just wanted to expose my feelings. Thanks!

lionel @lionelwalfish

Hi Gisele,
Glad to hear that NYC was fun, and that you spent loving time with the grand kids.
For some unexplained reason, my computer will not allow me to post on Story St Labs. Carlos and I have exchanged many e-mails about this, and the problem remains. I can read stories by others, and comment, but that seems to be it.
You had sent me your e-mail address, before leaving for New ... See more

Choi @Jeonggie

wow this is GREAT!! Well done Gisele, this is really good!

Gisele @giselerosenwald

Thank you so much Choi, I am glad you liked it.